Day 22 - Tuesday
- no class Thursday
- papers returned ASAP
II. Lexical Ties
What does the word lexical mean? Having to do with
word order. This principle combines sentence-level and
A. Group story-telling
On board we begin, "One day a fisherman caught a
talking fish." Students contribute subsequent sentences.
- How did you determine your next sentence?
- Do any sentences seem out of place?
B. Using lexical ties
Start a sentence 1) by keeping the character of the
previous sentence or 2) by picking up the new info at the end of
previous sentence. In other words, be able to trace a topic string in
- generate the workshopping worksheet
old to new
short to long
- workshop in groups of three
Compare the following paragraphs.
For beginning and intermediate skiers one of the best
skis is the Hart Queen. A very thin layer of tempered ash, ash direct
from the hardwood forests of Kentucky, makes up its core. And to
provide added strength and flexibility, there are two major
innovations used in its outer construction. Two sheets of ten-gauge
steel are securely molded to the alyer of ash for increased strength.
A wrapping of highly active fiberglass surrounds two steel sheets for
increased flexibility. Most conventional bindings can be used with
the Queen. The Salomon Double functions best, however. All the
standard lengths are in the Queen's size range, although the five to
six foot range is the easiest to obtain. Fortunately, any of six
different colors can be ordered.
One of the best skis for beginning and intermediate
skiers is the Hart Queen. Its core consists of a very thin layer of
tempered ash direct from the hardwood forests of Kentucky. Its outer
construction employs two major innovations to provide extra strength
and flexibility. For increased strength, the layer of ash has molded
to it two sheets of ten-gauge steel. For increased flexibility, the
two steel sheets are then wrapped with highly active fiberglass.
While the Queen can be used with most conventional bindings, it
functions best with the Salomon Double. It comes in standard lengths,
but it is easiest to find in the five to six foot range. Fortunately,
it can be ordered in any of six different colors.
Sentences for exploded paragraph
The first phase would be a preparation phase.
A case team would spend three to five days in
The team would include European Smith-Reynolds
management, a representative from Smith-Reynolds&emdash;U.S., and
representatives from ABC Consultants.
ABC will gather all available information about the
industry, and the case team will attempt to better define the systems
concept and prepare a field interviewing strategy for the U.S. and
In preparing our strategy, the team will need to
decide the geographic scope of the interviewing effort.
Our past experience indicates that focusing on fewer
countries is more effective than dispersing the effort throughout all
the European countries; therefore the team may want to limit the
interviews to the three largest Smith-Reynolds markets: Germany, the
U.K., and France or Italy.
We will also need to jointly determine the industry
participants who will need to be interviewed.
We may want to include OEMs, end-users, or other
knowledgeable people in the industry.