Day 25 - Thursday


Day 25 - Thursday

 

Questions for style review game:

 

NOMINALIZED ACTIONS:

 

Integrating all the existing islands of automation requires a structured approach with consideration of not just the physical problems associated with linking different computer-based technologies, but also the relative importance of these technologies to overall business strategy and the impact of their integration on the business environment.

 

Too precise a signification of information processing requirements incurs the risk of overestimation resulting in unused capacity or inefficient use of costly resources or of underestimation leading to ineffectiveness or other inefficiencies.

 

An understanding of growth is the basis for the identification of new threats and opportunities and the development of forecasts of future sales.

 

The Federalists' belief that the instability of government was a consequence of popular democracy was based on their belief in the tendency on the part of factions to further their self-interest at the expense of the common good.

 

BORING ACTIONS:

 

Kyle went all the way to the Museum of Natural History to see the fossils up close.

 

INAPPROPRIATE PASSIVES:

 

For another monosaccharide lipid, mannosylphosphoryldolichol, no inhibitory effect on synthesis was observed.

 

Forty years ago today, the first atomic bomb was dropped on Hiroshima.

 

LONG to SHORT:

 

However, the report from the Central Radiological Associates indicated a previously un-noted hairline fracture and thus contradicted Dr. Smith.

 

Preventing multiple taxation on profits or components of profits earned by the Group as a whole is the Group's objective in either case.

 

A practical problem of the editors in conducting undergraduate in and graduate courses in the teaching of English figured importantly in the decision to put this book together.

 

Altered vascular and mucosal permeability by a toxin elaborated by the vibrio is one hypothesis to explain this kind of severe dehydration.

 

NEW to OLD:

 

The sequence of sentence topics through a passage strongly determines the degree to which readers will judge a passage to be coherent or incoherent.

 

METADISCOURSE:

 

However, we also saw that on page three of the manual there are instructions to return the kit if customers are not completely sure they know what they are doing.

 

In my opinion, I can confidently say that it is very likely the case that China is on the verge of an industrial expansion.

 

INAPPROPRIATE STRESS MANAGEMENT:

 

If the summer is very hot and very dry, Kentucky bluegrass may go dormant; the crown and roots will remain alive and capable of regenerating even though the leaves will turn brown and die.

 

The Bairnes Fund is the one you should purchase. From its inception the Bairnes Fund has consistently out-performed all the major market indexes, although the record of the past is not necessarily indicative of future results.

 

CORRECT:

 

Dr. Smith advocates that the thoracic curve be fused from the superior neutrally rotated vertebra to the inferior neuturally rotated vertebra.

 

The sequence of topics in a passage is crucial for readers because cumulatively they determine not just what individual sentences are "about," but what a whole passage is about.

 

At the retrial, Dr. Smith was forced to acknowledge that the CRA report was more reliable than his own diagnosis.