Day 25 - Thursday
Questions for style review game:
NOMINALIZED ACTIONS:
Integrating all the existing islands of automation
requires a structured approach with consideration of not just the
physical problems associated with linking different computer-based
technologies, but also the relative importance of these technologies
to overall business strategy and the impact of their integration on
the business environment.
Too precise a signification of information processing
requirements incurs the risk of overestimation resulting in unused
capacity or inefficient use of costly resources or of underestimation
leading to ineffectiveness or other inefficiencies.
An understanding of growth is the basis for the
identification of new threats and opportunities and the development
of forecasts of future sales.
The Federalists' belief that the instability of
government was a consequence of popular democracy was based on their
belief in the tendency on the part of factions to further their
self-interest at the expense of the common good.
BORING ACTIONS:
Kyle went all the way to the Museum of Natural
History to see the fossils up close.
INAPPROPRIATE PASSIVES:
For another monosaccharide lipid,
mannosylphosphoryldolichol, no inhibitory effect on synthesis was
observed.
Forty years ago today, the first atomic bomb was
dropped on Hiroshima.
LONG to SHORT:
However, the report from the Central Radiological
Associates indicated a previously un-noted hairline fracture and thus
contradicted Dr. Smith.
Preventing multiple taxation on profits or components
of profits earned by the Group as a whole is the Group's objective in
either case.
A practical problem of the editors in conducting
undergraduate in and graduate courses in the teaching of English
figured importantly in the decision to put this book together.
Altered vascular and mucosal permeability by a toxin
elaborated by the vibrio is one hypothesis to explain this kind of
severe dehydration.
NEW to OLD:
The sequence of sentence topics through a passage
strongly determines the degree to which readers will judge a passage
to be coherent or incoherent.
METADISCOURSE:
However, we also saw that on page three of the manual
there are instructions to return the kit if customers are not
completely sure they know what they are doing.
In my opinion, I can confidently say that it is very
likely the case that China is on the verge of an industrial
expansion.
INAPPROPRIATE STRESS MANAGEMENT:
If the summer is very hot and very dry, Kentucky
bluegrass may go dormant; the crown and roots will remain alive and
capable of regenerating even though the leaves will turn brown and
die.
The Bairnes Fund is the one you should purchase. From
its inception the Bairnes Fund has consistently out-performed all the
major market indexes, although the record of the past is not
necessarily indicative of future results.
CORRECT:
Dr. Smith advocates that the thoracic curve be fused
from the superior neutrally rotated vertebra to the inferior
neuturally rotated vertebra.
The sequence of topics in a passage is crucial for
readers because cumulatively they determine not just what individual
sentences are "about," but what a whole passage is about.
At the retrial, Dr. Smith was forced to acknowledge
that the CRA report was more reliable than his own diagnosis.
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